You have all the answers,
still sometimes you are speechless.
You are worried, depressed, excited,
confident, contented and delighted.
You are a child, an adult, a preacher,
guilty, a realist, a dreamer,
conscious that little eyes are judging you
and unconsciously imitating you.
You have a responsibility to pass on
the traits like honesty and time management.
Have to set an example.
But you too are human!!
There is always a prayer
on your lips.
And the list goes on....
Hey...you must be a Mom
still sometimes you are speechless.
You are worried, depressed, excited,
confident, contented and delighted.
You are a child, an adult, a preacher,
guilty, a realist, a dreamer,
conscious that little eyes are judging you
and unconsciously imitating you.
You have a responsibility to pass on
the traits like honesty and time management.
Have to set an example.
But you too are human!!
There is always a prayer
on your lips.
And the list goes on....
Hey...you must be a Mom
42 comments:
yeah you are right...Moms are all that you mentioned. I should say that fathers are not very far away...
hey.. I love any such piece on mom.. keep them coming
@ Anons
Atleast let me know that the comment is from a mom or a dad ??
Had a altercation with mom in the morning..:-(
Well recite this one in front of her and galdddify her...
mums are all that n so much more...i think mum's r gods way of taking care of each one of us :)
mothers :) .. the best .. always :)
@New cloud
You do not need any poem to Gladdify her.She is glad just to be your mom.:-)
@GUL
well said.
@Thoughts
Bestest...:-) right!
@Surinder.
best always?? Per kabhi kabhi bahut gussa aa jata hai and then later I feel so GUILTY. :-(
now when i'm mom myself ...i can feel what my mom felt:)
wonderful! brilliant! superb! kamaal kar diya!
Yes, as Thaughts as said , mom's are the bestest! And I am sure ur kids are very lucky to hv a wonderful mom like u!
Very nicely expressed, but I can swear that this poem was not there on your blog on thursday, as the date on your blog suggests :-)
Probably you had started to write this on thursday it self, and finished it by friday evening or saturday.
But like anonymous said, fathers are not far behind. Though me not a father yet :-)
sorry forgot to add my name to my earlier comment about being mom myself...zilch
Hi Deepak.
Thanks for the adjectives...All this Zarranawzi does make my day.
I showed Gul's comment to my daughter (10 yr old)and told her that quotation
That God can not be with each child(physically) so He made Moms.
She laughed and said that this is exaggaration.
And then As RED said 'One has to be a mom to feel that way!
@ Hi Manish,Thanks.
I posted it on friday.Some 'setting' must be wrong..
This poems very well written vandy! I think one part of every parent is always thinking about the child - whatever one's doing. It's always in the sub-conscious mind.
its time for new post:)
last comment was mine to remind u of new post...another reminder...post something...red
Hi Red I knew it was ur comment.Yaar I'm running out of ideas..:-(
and at work also ..the most busy week with christmas and then results and all that. Couldn't comment on ur posts too.May be a new post on new year.:-)
Bye
Ashtrix says ...
Hey Vandy, the poem reminds me of SRK 'Mere desh ki har maa aap jaisi hai' dialogue in Veer Zaara. I am sure what you wrote is as true of you .. as your mom.
putr kuputr aur mata kumata en saare keywords se ek shlok hai jo abhi mere zehan mein nahin aa raha . . .
Dhoop
Hi Ashtrix
Yes all mothers are alike..
yet to watch Veer Zaara..
@ My dad used to tell that shloke a lot....will ask him the exact words and leave here.
CHITRAHAAR HERE:
kuchh saal pahle shaam ke 8 baje Fridays aur Wednesdays ko saara India dekhta tha mujhe... aur aaj Friday hai...aur mai yeh gaana zarur bajata tha ... toh yeh lo... 'NAYE SAAL KA PAHLA JAAM...AAP KE NAAM...HAPPY NEW YEAR ' ( Film : Aap Ke Saath; Pic on Anil Kapoor; Music Laxmikant Pyarelal)
Dhoop :
off the topic . . . just read ur answer (ref. my enq abt K P Saxena )
jaane kahan gaye voh din jab gharon mein aatee thi :
manorma, dharmbharti (daboo ka kona wala cartoon yaad hai???), parag , dinmaan, sarika (not sarita but sarika)
@ dhoop First of all HNY.
first person I'm communicating to on New year!
Dharambharti nahi dharmyug!!
But mom used to prefer "Saptahik Hindustan".Yes Sarika...
Did you read "Weekend",middle page used to be a poster.NO?? see how ancient I am...
@chitrahaar
:-) :-)
HNY
The hero was Anil Kapoor and heroine Rati Agnihotri?
NAYE SAAL KI BAHUT BAHUT SHUBHKAAMNAYEN...TO YOU & YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY... ( PS..naya saal, naya post ho jaaye?)
CHITRAHAAR HERE:
LOL ... arre wah... u remembered? yeah, the heroine was Rati Agnihotri...also had Raj Kiran and Smita Patil and one lovely Lata number : jind le gaya woh dil ka jaani, ke but bejaan rah gaya; mehmaan chala gaya ghar se, yeh khaali makaan rah gaya
@Deepak
Happy and happiest new year and beyond...
New post...sure!
@Chitrahaar
Ye kaun Chitrehaar hai ye kaun Chitrehaar?
:-)
@ Chitarhaar.
Talking of Lata number.....are you DJ ??
LOL ... yeah that Chitrahaar was me only... par that was nice way of catching me up..achcha trademark ban gaya hai... i m happy ke log mujhe mere lata -comments se jaanne lage hai :)
wishing you loads of love,contentment and happiness in 2005!!!
wishing you loads of love,contentment and happiness in 2005!!! red
dear red,
Thanks for the wishes
and a very happy new year to you and your dear ones.
vandy I m glad to get Vandy’s first HNY.
arre haan Saptahik Hindustan to mere ghar pe aata tha. Isse maine kaise miss kar diya
right dharmyug. Thanks I stand corrected. Weekend to nahin per ek times group ki english monthly thi per naam nahin yaad aa raha.
Aap ne bataya nahin ki daboo ji ka kona aap ko yaad hai ki nahin
Dhoop
How can I forget 'Cartoon kona Dabbuji'? A strange character in black robe...
BTW who is the cartoonist? Pran, Sudhir Dar or someone else?
Dhoop :
@Vandy . . . arre bachpan ke sawan mein yeh khyaal kahan rehta tha. haan per pran aur sudhir dar ki drawing i can recognise and i can say safely that it 'as not their creation
Ashtrix said ...
Hey Vandy .. here's wishing you and your family a happy new year ... a year full of joy, success and peace.
A new post if definitely overdue now. :-).
Also, I have posted my first blog story. Would love to have your comments on it.
Vandy, time for new post please.
Yeah, Vandy, if this was meant to be a patience test...then toh i hv lost it! Ab post kar do pls!
And, a new post up my blog ! :)
aaawwwww vandy how could i miss this post by u.It is so touching n soo true.Reading this post makes me feel every moment that a mother goes through.U have really written it with your soul in it.this is the best gift a mother can receive.I wish i could make it read to granny but i am sure she is so much aware of her kids heart.love u Darlin
Thanks Runu..:-)
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